10 to 1

Advanced contributor joeyj2101
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(Verse 1)
To much beer and whiskey will take over how you think
Cause she was never as pretty as before my last drink
High Life and Jager are close friends of mine
But we never can agree on where to draw the line
Found me an angel who was sent from above
Got back to her place and we made crazy drunk love
Got up this morning thinkin’ what have I done
I went to bed with a ten…..
And woke up with a one!
(Chorus)
Whatever happened to my backwoods beauty
That little cutie smelled fruity, I think her name was Judy
I thought that I had really hit a homerun
But I wanted to run home after I seen what I’d done
Went out lookin’ for a little bit of fun
Ended up in bed with a ten…..
And woke up with a one!
(Verse 2)
As the sun rose up, so did my blood shot eyes
You can only imagine how I was feelin’ inside
What had happened to my goddess from the night before
Cause whatever this is here, has me headin’ for the door
Damn that PBR and the chilled Patron
This time, let me tell you boys, they really done me wrong
I grabbed my keys, put on my shoes, I was ready to run
I’d went to bed with a ten……
And woke up with a one!
(Chorus)
(Tag)
I was just lookin’ for some fun…
And went from ten to one!

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4 Responses to 10 to 1

swarmin1
Commented:  April 18, 2013 at 10:46 PM()

Ha! Sounds like real life to me! Great country song!

marandan
Commented:  April 18, 2013 at 11:33 PM()

Cool hook and the concept is good… but, I think that the first part of the chorus should be more generic so that it works after each verse… maybe something about your eyes get blurry at the end of the night… or after too much drink… other than that, it sounded pretty cool.

Jeremy
Commented:  April 21, 2013 at 3:15 AM()

I like it, clever and catchy but the chorus needs to be more of a summary and really sell the 10 to 1 theme.. I hear a play on numbers kinda thing in my head for a playful, novel chorus.

1 shot 2 many I was 3 sheets to the wind
4 what its worth high 5’s had me convince my friends

That was just an off the top of my head example…

No matter what it is a great song…

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