Can’t Be

Advanced contributor joeyj2101
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Lying here in this house alone
Wonderin’ why you can’t pick up the phone
I try to convince myself everything’s ok
You don’t think twice to give me a call
I probably never cross your mind at all
And I don’t hear from you till the very next day
(Chorus)
Well I never ever even thought
That you and I would be apart
But now I know that we can’t be
Now our love’s been thrown off track
And what’s been said we can’t take back
And now I know(And I know too).
You and I can’t be
(2nd)
If you love someone and your is true
You won’t put them what you’ve put me through
And I feel like I’ve lost me best friend
Well my whole life I’ve always heard
That actions speak much louder than words
And the cold hard true is we’re at our end

(Repeat Chorus)

(Tag)
Well I never ever even thought
That you and I would be apart
But now I know(And I know too).
That we can’t be

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6 Responses to Can’t Be

swarmin1
Commented:  April 18, 2013 at 10:34 PM()

I like it, I was a little thrown off at the pauses to star with, but started digging it. It makes it have a modern pop feel, it still maintains that old heartfelt sound too. nice mix!

    joeyj2101
    Commented:  April 19, 2013 at 9:16 AM()

    Thank you. I’ve had a few people think the cd was skipping! lol! But after a few times they liked how it paused. It gives it it’s own feel. Thanks for the review!

Jeremy
Commented:  April 21, 2013 at 3:28 AM()

LOVE the pause… makes you mentally stop and think as well and focus more of what is going on.. A brief moment to reflect and move on to the next part of the song…. I dig it…!

JamesZ
Commented:  April 27, 2013 at 10:55 AM()

The pause is way cool, but…. perhaps it could be made to sound more on purpose?

I’m sure you’ve thought of that already and did it the way you did to create what you have….I’m just not convinced its working to put the songs best foot forward. I guess I’d say that a song should grab you and make you go wow and not wonder if something is wrong with the CD.

Perhaps if the pause was in the intro? The intro bars didn’t feel like they connected to the rest of the song, or not as strongly as it could have.

Good mix, story and flow. Great ending.

Hope my feedback can be useful….

marc lee
Commented:  April 30, 2013 at 8:30 PM()

frankly, the pause…….is one of the best parts of the song. it’s an element of creativity that’s often missing in country music. the mix was good, but i would have brought the lady in much earlier.

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