Made this one today. I didn’t have any idea of where it was going to go or anything, just made the first guitar part and then added part and layers as it went on.
I definitely wanted more. The piece has a hypnotic quality. I would suggest a stronger beat to help the listener through the rhythm change toward the end.
Glad you enjoyed it! I’d definitely rather leave you wanting more than to bore you by adding stuff just to make it longer! I’ll keep your advice in mind for sure! I might come back to this piece eventually, but I’m always just wanting to write more instead of coming back to the stuff I’ve already made, haha.
Very nice! I like where it’s goin too. I say dito to what clitsythe wrote. it seems to me that this “can” rock even more.
I appreciate it! Going to keep your guys’ advice in mind for when I come back to this sometime!
I have always loved fine accoustic work and find your guitar work a sort of mystical in a way! I also would agree with clintsythe, I didn’t expect it to end so soon. I was just getting into the mystical sound and wanted more! Good work., Do a little more on it.
Sorry to sell you short! haha. Thanks a bunch though, I hope to make this longer soon!
I know the feeling of wanting to move on and do something new. But you are getting some great feedback on this tune and I think it’s worth a re-visit. This will make a nice instrumental piece. I can even hear this evolving into an electronic tune. Collaborating with someone may be a good option for you. Sometimes this can open the door to other ideas for you and take the song in a direction or genre that you otherwise would not. I like what you have so far. Great job!
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