The production sounds good. I would have liked to seen the lyrics posted and 8:00 plus minutes is a little to long for me. Nice feel and playing and your vocals fit the song well
Nice groove going in this, good instrumentation and great vocals. Maybe some of the leads could be brought up in the mix. My main crit is that for a song to last 8 mins there needs to be a lot of different parts and development on multiple themes to capture interest. While this is a really nice theme it simply cant support this time frame without any variation or chorus. If it were my song I would trim to about 3 minutes and you would have something that would keep attention for the duration of the song.
As I said, its a lovely theme with a great groove, so there is some real potential in this song.
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