I Am The One

Advanced contributor kessmonsters
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Now I have been thinking about you
Cause you been talking about me
Now I want to see this thing through
Cause you mean so much to me
I’ll be there no matter what you do
I’ll be there just to be close to you
I believe, I believe I’m the one for you

I am the one whose going to hold you all night
I am the one who’ll make everything alright
I am the one, I am the one for you

Now I, I believe in you
Cause you yeah your love is so true
Now we, we walk and talk all day
Cause now we’re in love that way
I’ll be there to give you all you need
I’ll be there just you wait and see
I believe, I believe I’m the one for you

I am the one whose going to tuck you in tight
I am the one who’ll make love to you all night
I am the one, I am the one for you

Now I, I’m so in love with you
Cause you, yeah you love me so true
I’ll be there to hold your hand
I’ll be there and swear to be your man
I believe, I believe I am the one for you

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11 Responses to I Am The One

Toney Wright
Commented:  May 20, 2013 at 11:33 PM()

love the groove!! catchy song…love the piano and guitar!!

seriousfun
Commented:  May 23, 2013 at 1:52 AM()

Yup, I am likin this. Pretty strong musically with good vox and a nicely balanced recording. Like the piano and very good guitars. Only nit would be the lyrics. The chorus is good and sums up the verses well. But the verses just seem to say the same thing without progressing the song. But hey, there are many really popular songs that do the same, the saving grace here is the chorus is so very strong.

Good song, good luck with it.

Its well put together and performed. honestly though the song doesn’t do it for me. The lyrics seem too predictable and cliche. I also think it drags along a little slowly. So sorry but this one doesn’t shine for me. I think you’re going for a party song that’s not terribly deep and I get that but it doesn’t have enough punch to make me want to party.

marc lee
Commented:  May 26, 2013 at 11:06 AM()

like the use of the keyboards. nice touch. not wild about the lyrics.

Good Job, like it.

I’ve made some comments on the track itself.

More vocals in the mix, Harmonies. EQ seems a bit flat over all, and the frequencies are not making space for the arrangement. Instruments all seem to be centered, no left or right offsets…or not enough.

Good job on it, nice hooks and great instruments.

James

I like the melody and the overall vibe of this tune! Nice guitar chops! I like the chorus effect on your vocals! Vocal harmonies! Nice!

I agree with what has already been said about the lyrics. I have nothing to add.

The overall production sounds great!

Bob

Kess – First off your playing and singing is excellent, but …. I know theres nothing new under the sun, but your song is very similiar to a Ron Wood song called ‘Thing About You’ on his cd ‘I Feel Like Playing’. Like I said I know theres nothing new, but I just couldn’t listen without hearing the similiarities. I know from your prior works – your no hack. I just thought you might want to take a listen.

Jim

kessmonsters
Commented:  May 31, 2013 at 12:56 AM()

once again thank you all for your comments. i guess you caught me at it. yes i did kind of get lazy on the lyric on this one. can’t get anything past you guys. kess
not being a r. wood fan. i have not heard the song that i can remember. but if your going to get inspired/steal, do it from the best. lol
kess

MetroPeaceTribe
Commented:  June 10, 2013 at 11:07 AM()

Honkey Tonk Blues. Bad boy country. Whatever you call it, just throw in some hot chicks in your video and you’ll get some hits on YouTube! Nothing too cutting edge, very generic, early 70’s.

Joe fame
Commented:  August 20, 2013 at 5:46 PM()

I think the band is good but the song is kinda weak. The very beginning reminded me of the intro to the Georgia Satellites tune “Keep Your Hands to Yourself”. Some of the changes seem uninspired (the “I’ll be there” part) and the lyrics are pretty cliched and trite. My advice is to maybe rewrite this one. It seems like you haven’t spent enough time perfecting this tune. But you’ve got a good band! I don’t like being a dousche when reviewing stuff but, bottom line, I bet you could do better.

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