If I Was

Advanced contributor jeremy
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~ If I Was ~

Who are we, to tell somebody who to love
We’re all born free, so who really gives a fuck
So just do you, and live your own style of life
cause when the lights go down, its not your business who I do tonight

If I was gay, Brad Pitt would be the 1st to know
I’d suck his dick like he had the cure
If I was gay, my roomie would be the next to know
I would rock their fuckin world fo sho
I’d slow it down, move it around
Let them know whos the man
If I Was…

Baby Jesus, died on the cross for all sins
not for ignorance, regardless of its bliss
so using God, to escape your bitter reality
does no good, so kiss my ass between the cheeks

If I was gay, Brad Pitt would be the 1st to know
I’d suck his dick like he had the cure
If I was gay, my roomie would be the next to know
I would rock their fuckin world fo sho
I’d slow it down, move it around
Let them know whos the man
If I Was…

This is the part where we go to the dance floor
Hey you over there, what the fuck you got pants for
we all came to this world butt naked and free
you are just like me, if i cut you, you bleed
and just like me you just want to be loved
the only difference is you like it in the butt.. NOW!!

If I was gay, Brad Pitt would be the 1st to know
I’d suck his dick like he had the cure
If I was gay, my roomie would be the next to know
I would rock their fuckin world fo sho
I’d slow it down, move it around
Let them know whos the man
If I Was…

If I was gay, Brad Pitt would be the 1st to know
I’d suck his dick like he had the cure
If I was gay, my roomie would be the next to know
I would rock their fuckin world fo sho
I’d slow it down, move it around
Let them know whos the man
If I Was…

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9 Responses to If I Was

Toney Wright
Commented:  April 16, 2013 at 8:11 AM()

the music is good and it’s well written. not that crazy about the lyrics
but, the song is structured good.

BigFun
Commented:  April 16, 2013 at 12:31 PM()

I hate that damn Soundcloud player! It does not handle loud dense mixes at all…something about the compression algorithm it uses, I dunno. So where your mix gets dense during the choruses it just sounds like a bunch of swirling pumping.

Yeah, I’m personally not a huge fan of the lyrics…not because of the naughty words or anything, but more because I’ve never liked songs with a preachy message and some of the words here seem a little arhythmic as well… Brad Pitt?? Is he still even considered a sex symbol? Isn’t he like 50? Musically, it sounds about right for what it is (I’m guessing some sort of electronic club music?) and I’m sure the mix sounds decent when the Soundcloud player isn’t smooshing the hell out of it.

    Jeremy
    Commented:  April 16, 2013 at 1:09 PM()

    ‘Brad Pitt’ is just two single syllable words…! I have a gay couple that are very good friends and they are hands down the happiest couple I have ever known. I agree it got a wee bit preachy, but it was hard to stay respectful with such a topic for me in the moment. I was not out to offend the gay community because I have no issue with them. My problem is with those who judge and hide behind a book written by man. Anyway… Thank you for taking the time to listen and post…

kessmonsters
Commented:  April 16, 2013 at 11:34 PM()

very cool, lyrics are interesting. i like it kess

The music is good. I have no problem with the subject, but I feel like a lot of the lyrics were used just for thier shock value.

    Jeremy
    Commented:  April 21, 2013 at 1:09 PM()

    All of us here will assume you have not made it to ‘Do Do (Do Do Do)’ or ‘…but sex.’ yet. So, for the shock value statement we wont judge you 😉

    However, thank you for taking the time to listen and post.

      ‘Do Do (Do Do Do)’ was funny! ‘But Sex’ not so much. Like yours I can appreciate the music and creative process. Lyrics just for the attention, I feel kind of cheapens or takes away from its legitamacy.
      No offence was intended.

        Jeremy
        Commented:  April 22, 2013 at 2:28 AM()

        None was taken.. I uploaded “If I Have To Wait” just to show I am a legit songwriter. I just have an overactive sense of humor and music is my universal outlet and escape..

rllewis999
Commented:  April 21, 2013 at 7:35 PM()

Keep working it!

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