My Fix

Advanced contributor joeyj2101
posted 29 comments!

My eyes are blown, off liquid and dust
From a three day binge
But I can see, through all the haze
That our love’s come unhinged
Time spent making love and trust is gone……
Now I’m forced into the world to face it alone……
My blood boils from the sweet release
That I pushed into me
Hoping to run from all this pain
And insecurities
The light I had before is dimming fast……
One more drink will fuel the flame and help it last…..
I can’t sleep, and I can’t think
Just give me my fix
You’re my drug and you’re my drink
Just give me my fix (x2)

Just give me my fix…..

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10 Responses to My Fix

Occasionally we get comments posted on our SoundCloud page. This one I’m forwarding from Héctor Mayoral-Modestti:

Ooh, shivers down my spine!!! Very well done!!! Professional sound, the guitar and voice sound delectable! great work! This is some hell ‘o’ country ma’ man!

Toney Wright
Commented:  April 18, 2013 at 10:49 AM()

I think it’s great!! the vocals stand out very good and guitar is really good too. I just wish it was a little longer. I was really getting into it and then it ended.

    Commented:  April 18, 2013 at 10:55 AM()

    I hear ya Toney. NSAI said songs should be 3mins to 4mins. So I try to keep them within there limits!!! I could have played and wrote forever! Fun song to perform live too!!!! Thanks!

Commented:  April 18, 2013 at 10:43 PM()

Love this a lot! You got a big plan for it?

    Commented:  April 19, 2013 at 9:21 AM()

    With all my songs I hope someday to have them picked up by someone and get them published and played, but you know how that is!!! Long slow process!

Nice production although you might ease up on the echo and reverb. I think you have a very nice voice but I don’t think this performance is the best you can do. It sounds a little shaky in places. The lyrics are pretty good but I think you should think about changing the line that ends in insecurities. That word doesn’t sing very well and with the phrasing you use it really sticks out in a bad way.

I think the song is about getting wrapped up in the physical aspect of love and not developing a mutually respectful love for each other but it’s not real clear in what you wrote so more clarification on what the problem in the story is might be needed.

Overall this is good and you’re on the right track

Hope that helps

Commented:  April 21, 2013 at 2:56 AM()

Good stuff… I was drawn in by the lyrics and was right there with your pain.. Well done!!

Great voice. Loved the guitar. The levels are all great. At first I thought the chorus should be a little different musically from the rest of the song, for a little diversity, but your vocals made it work. Nice job.

marc lee
Commented:  April 21, 2013 at 8:07 PM()

nice tune; liked the mix.

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