Please give input on the style.
another good one!! love the arrangement and you have a very good voice, good writing also!!
Feels like you are trying to hard and it gets rushed in the verse, chorus gets congested and feels all over the place as if you took individual people signing the lead and just layered them. The music does not work for my ears.
This is just my opinion and keep working on your craft..
Well like I said this was a live take..so not much studio processing
Use a piano instead of what your using. Sounds like a harpsicord. Piano will give it a more today sound. And with the strings in the back it would sound great I think. It can use a killer Bass too!!!This song is screaming for a sweet bass line! Just me though. Hope it helps!! Good song!
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