Welcome to the site and thank you for posting your song. Please note that our songwriters tend to reciprocate with comments and critiques. Expect to get out of this site what you put into it! Please provide at least 2 comments for each song you post. Looking forward to your participation and hearing your music. Hope you enjoy the site! Bob
Thank you Mr. Bob! Do you mean post two comments alongside the song, i.e. what it’s about and stuff?
No, I’m referring to leaving comments for other songwriters who post their songs on this site! Sorry if that was confusing! Good luck and have fun!
Oh, ok, thanks again, Sir!
When the song started, the drum programing sounded a little cheesy to me. Then 5 seconds later the cheese turn into fine wine! The vibe you create, with an excellent emotional vocal, made this a must listen to song! Excellent job creating the underlying vocal parts and harmony!
Production wise the mix could use some tweaking and the main vocals up in the mix. But you did not indicate your goals for this so I’ll assume this is a demo take.
I think your title is the weakest part of the song. Some of the lyrics are not clear in the mix and I always suggest posting the lyrics if you want constructive feedback.
Very catchy melody! Overall, great job with this tune! Nicely done!
Thank you very much 🙂 yes the mixing was indeed the hardest part, tried my best to bring out the vocals. Thanks!
I liked it, too. Good tone, beat, vocals and lyrics. If you pop in a top (high falsetto..?) and a rich bass bottom, it could kick it up, fill it out and make it even richer than it already is. Keep up the great work… and… as Kasey Kasem used to say… “keep reaching for the stars!”
If you want, sir, a lyric video is in this link:
Love it!! your song has a great story line ad the lyrics are good. I’ve played it three times already. good mix and very good vocals!!…Toney
i like the idea, but i believe there’s a better way to produce your song. it seems somewhat subdued in some way very dark instrumentation. i think strings with a little funky jazz clean rhythm guitar might brighten up your production. just a thought. everybody’s a producer, right? .kess
I’d really like to give you feedback on this but I can’t give feedback unless you give more back to the site. You should realistically expect to get as many reviews, at best, as you give.
Thank you sir, yes I have tried to give feedback to other people, because otherwise I would be a bit hypocritical. I apologize though, sometimes it slips my mind or I’m just busy. thanks again! 🙂
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