Oh How I Love You Babe

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Welcome to the site and thank you for posting your song. Please note that our songwriters tend to reciprocate with comments and critiques. Expect to get out of this site what you put into it! Please provide at least 2 comments for each song you post. Looking forward to your participation and hearing your music. Hope you enjoy the site! Bob

When the song started, the drum programing sounded a little cheesy to me. Then 5 seconds later the cheese turn into fine wine! The vibe you create, with an excellent emotional vocal, made this a must listen to song! Excellent job creating the underlying vocal parts and harmony!

Production wise the mix could use some tweaking and the main vocals up in the mix. But you did not indicate your goals for this so I’ll assume this is a demo take.

I think your title is the weakest part of the song. Some of the lyrics are not clear in the mix and I always suggest posting the lyrics if you want constructive feedback.

Very catchy melody! Overall, great job with this tune! Nicely done!

Toney Wright
Commented:  May 21, 2013 at 10:52 PM()

Love it!! your song has a great story line ad the lyrics are good. I’ve played it three times already. good mix and very good vocals!!…Toney

kessmonsters
Commented:  May 22, 2013 at 3:22 PM()

i like the idea, but i believe there’s a better way to produce your song. it seems somewhat subdued in some way very dark instrumentation. i think strings with a little funky jazz clean rhythm guitar might brighten up your production. just a thought. everybody’s a producer, right? .kess

I’d really like to give you feedback on this but I can’t give feedback unless you give more back to the site. You should realistically expect to get as many reviews, at best, as you give.

Danny

    BritLad27
    Commented:  May 24, 2013 at 9:44 PM()

    Thank you sir, yes I have tried to give feedback to other people, because otherwise I would be a bit hypocritical. I apologize though, sometimes it slips my mind or I’m just busy. thanks again! 🙂

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