Only In My Dreams

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stova007
Commented:  January 4, 2013 at 2:33 PM()

Cool song, and catchy too. The intro is too long for me, you may be best suited to just jump straight into the song and nix the intro. 6:30 minutes is very long for this type of tune. Maybe cut down on the solo right before the last verse and chorus to trim down the time.

Your guitar sounds great, and goes well with your voice. Your harmonies are spot on, and are my favorite part of the song. Great work

Rembow
Commented:  January 4, 2013 at 2:44 PM()

I enjoyed the hell out of this. But I agree with stova007, maybe it’s a little long. I personally like long instrumental passages but that’s just me. Maybe trim it up after the solo.

But other than that I love it, especially the intro: the notes and implied chords take unexpected yet melodic turns that really catch the ear and demand attention (which lasts for a long time). Plus I’m a sucker for bass + drums intros.

Reminds me a lot of Mark Knopfler/Dire Straits also. Which is a good thing.

Good tune. I like the bass and guitar interplay in the intro. Good lead vocals and I like the way vocals played off each other at the 4:50 area. If I had anything I’d change – the musical break was a
little on the long side. Very good song. Could definitely get some people do’n a little grind onthe dance floor.

clintsythe
Commented:  January 6, 2013 at 12:18 PM()

I like this. It has an ambiance that captivates. It reminds me of Chris Isaak – Wicked Game.
Production suggestions:
Break up the reverb pallet to add more depth to the sound stage.
Break the line for the synth in the instrumental break into two contrasting voices that call back and forth to each other.
Change nothing else.
As I said, I really liked it.

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