Psychosurgery

Noobie user ina_catalog
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A strapped lass imagined that, I pulled

the chord that kept us plugged

a paranoia caused

some to see things, that never, really… were…

Did she envision it?

is that why

fell asleep onto Surgeon’s hand

a paranoia caused

one to see things that never, really… were…

it’s just… a faul…ty wire… bug

their meds… cannot… retrace

they’ll have… you back… to norm soon love

from something science could not explain

and if the tracks running down your arms

don’t lead to my door

will ya give up?

or give some more?

and if the tracks running down your arms

don’t lead to a cure

please don’t give up

just give some more

a tragic victim cries!

don’t care to recognize/reconcile

just keep me alive…

a silenced voice it cries!

keep me alive

keep me alive

keep me alive

keep me a…

 it’s just… a faul…ty wire… bug

their scions will soon replace

we’ll piece you back together love

to something scanner cannot retrace

and if the tracks running down your arms

don’t lead to my door

will ya give up?

or give some more?

the drama’s never the bore

you’ll never be a chore

it’s grey while dense

and will keep in this jar…

and if the tracks running down your arms

don’t lead to a cure

please don’t give up

just give some more…

no, please don’t give up…

just give some more…

if the tracks running down your arms

don’t lead to a cure

please don’t give up

just give some more

no, please don’t… give up

just give some more

 

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4 Responses to Psychosurgery

Rembow
Commented:  January 6, 2013 at 2:28 PM()

Great vibe here, I definitely recommend doing this with an instrument too. I think a really fuzzed out, spacey, compressed (vague terms, I know) electric guitar would sound awesome. Maybe some sparse, erratic drumming too. Awesome.

clintsythe
Commented:  January 10, 2013 at 8:24 AM()

ina_catalog,
I am wondering what type of musical accompaniment you hear for this piece. Is it electric, acoustic, perhaps other?

kessmonsters
Commented:  January 11, 2013 at 12:41 AM()

you have a good idea here, obviously hooking up with a musician who can write good rock songs you might have a good song here. good luck, kessmonsters

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