ROAD OF UNCERTAINTY

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6 Responses to “ROAD OF UNCERTAINTY”

  1. Toney Wright says:

    the sun is slowly peeping through the curtain
    sweat is beading on my brow
    last night I drank away my hurting
    this morning it don’t matter anyhow
    I fell in love with you before I got to know you
    I guess it’s true that love is blind
    but, I kept thinking that I could change you
    the only thing I changed was my mind

    now You’re there when I’m here you’re so far when I’m near
    you’re always out when I’m in
    and a mile may as well be a hundred miles
    for I know I’ll never see you again

    now I can think of a few good reasons
    but, I’m not the one to place the blame
    maybe it’s the changing of the seasons
    maybe it’s the season for a change
    I’m traveling down that road of uncertainty
    I ventured too far to go back home
    now I just don’t know what’s gonna become of me
    all I know is that it can’t be long

    now you’re there when I’m here you’re so far when I’m near
    you’re always out when I’m in
    and a mile may as well be a hundred miles
    for I know I’ll never see you again

  2. BossMan says:

    I feel your pain as it hurt to listen to this.

  3. Joe fame says:

    Hey Toney – Solid recording techniques but I think the drums are a little low in the mix. Great guitar work. However, if you’ll allow me to be blunt, I think your vocals are not up to par. They’re a little growly and the timing drags. If that’s what you’re going for you accomplished that but you might consider a different vocalist. Also, lyrically, it is a little vague as far as what’s going on. It does have a sad, haunting quality though. Keep on writing!

    • Toney Wright says:

      Thanks for your comment Joe. Yea my vocals are little raspy and drags some. some like it, some don’t. Like you I don’t consider myself a singer I just go with what I got and that’s about as good as it’s gonna get. LOL!!

  4. gofirjet gofirjet says:

    Well I am one that appreciates the unique quality in your vocals. With a little production help this could be a great mix. Song structure is good and the lyrics are great! Kudos to your songwriting skills! Love the guitar riffs throughout! Keep me coming’! Bob

    • Toney Wright says:

      Thank You Bob..I’m not very good on the production part I’ve got a lot to learn. When I get the bucks I’m gonna go to a real studio and let then do it.

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