Till I Give Up The Ghost
Advanced contributor triggs posted 27 comments!
Some rough stuff out of my studio consisting of a live acoustic and vocal track after which I went back and added bass guitar. This is a work recording but I wanted to throw it out there to see what I could gleam from the esteemed critics here at Artist Nest.
Comments: 6 Comments
i like the idea maybe more chordal movement, more defined hook might help
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“I know my love will go” sounds like the title to me. That’s what I was hearing when the song finished. I think you should build on that idea. You have a lot of energy in your acoustic and I like where you are going with it! Just continue to work around that energy. So occasionally we need a break, then right back to it. Great first draft! Thanks for posting.
Bob
Thanks Bob!
love the guitar. I agree, the hook needs more support. A percussion section may help define the envelope of the song’s dynamics in terms of the crescendos and the softer passages.
Yes percussion’s would be great once I’m satisfied with what I’m doing. Thank you very much for commenting!